Standardized Mission Statement

Here is a school district’s interim mission statement, with my suggested edits in italics: “We develop our children’s greatest abilities and make possible the discovery and pursuit of their dreams through standardized testing, which when fulfilled can benefit us all. We prepare every child to become the architect of his or her own life long education through standardized testing. We provide a comprehensive and innovative approach to education and graduate successful, curious, confident, and hopeful students who are able to confront the great challenges of their time through standardized testing.”

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  1. Robert LaRue says:

    I’d add a comma after “which” and one after “fulfilled”… but that would be focusing on the trees instead of the forest, which should be burned down.

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